Tuesday, September 13, 2011

Blur

Days blur into each other
I passed this street yesterday
Change this life for another
But would I want it that way?

Stuck in this bubble
Dreaming kaleidoscopic 
What's the trouble?
I'm slightly sick

But now I'm okay
That feeling went away
Like it does everyday
Today, yesterday

I'm fine now
Somehow
Though I used
To be confused

But I'm fine now
I'm really fine
Really
Potato.

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Just trying to capture the confused feeling.

4 comments:

  1. seems to echo what i have been feeling for a while now... have tried to capture it in words too, relentlessly, but somehow it never quite seems to do justice to the bizarre volatility inside.

    needless to say, loved what you wrote..

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  2. @Gobsmacked

    We all feel the confusion man, and it's ok to feel so. I just tried to capture that.

    Thanks for reading :)

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  3. i like your verses...you just got a new follower :)

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  4. ''But now I'm okay
    That feeling went away
    Like it does everyday
    Today, yesterday''

    Exactly what i feel most of my time :O

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